Incident 009 · Printed page 32
The Straight Whisker
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German Rex / St. Louis, Missouri
The hair was white, curved and almost three inches long. Marcus held it between thumb and forefinger above the clean counter.
“Edie,” he said.
Edie sat on the kitchen mat. The red-and-white cat had a soft coat that lay in little waves, especially along her shoulders. Her whiskers bent and hooked in several directions. She lifted her face when Marcus said her name, then looked away.
His son was loading the dishwasher. “You don’t know it’s hers.”
“We own one cat.”
“We own brushes.”
Marcus had promised his sister a clean kitchen. She never commented on the old cabinets or the chipped tile. She noticed everything on the counter. He had wiped it twice before breakfast and had asked his son to keep Edie off it, though Edie preferred the mat near his feet.
He laid the white strand on a dark saucer. It was exceptionally straight except for a neat bend at its end. Edie’s whiskers curled untidily. Marcus leaned down to examine her face. Edie sniffed his fingers, found nothing edible and settled with her paws under her chest.
His son took a new bottle brush out of the drying rack. Its bristles were white. Near the tip, one small space showed between them. He set the brush beside the saucer.
Marcus looked at both. He rubbed the strand between his fingers. It sprang back. Then he bent it farther. The strand kept the bend.
“Plastic,” his son said.
Marcus put it in the trash. He put the brush there too. He asked his son why he had not mentioned the loose bristles earlier.
“I was told to keep an eye on the cat.”
Outside, a delivery van stopped at the curb. Edie got up and went to the front window. Marcus rinsed the saucer and inspected the empty counter from one end to the other.
His son finished the dishwasher, closed its door and went to stand beside Edie.
For a while, they both kept an eye on the van.
Feline rulingA whisker should belong to somebody.
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